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Chapter 4 - The Storm Ahead

The safest decision was Shannon.

Under normal circumstances, there would have been no debate.

Long runway.

Emergency services.

Experienced crews.

Medical facilities waiting for Captain Mercer.

But nothing about Flight 782 was normal anymore.

The storm system ahead had intensified faster than forecast.

A thick red wall covered the weather radar.

Noah shook his head.

"We cannot take this airplane through that."

"Edge?"

"Maybe. But if we lose more hydraulic control in severe turbulence, we're finished."

Ethan looked at the alternate airport.

"Ballymore."

Noah groaned.

"Don't say it."

"Runway length?"

"You already know."

"Say it."

Noah gave him the number.

Ethan calculated.

"Landing weight?"

Noah checked.

Still heavy.

They hadn't burned enough fuel yet.

"Too heavy," Noah said.

"What if we dump fuel?"

"This model can, but not fast enough to solve everything. And with our system problems, I'd rather not introduce another variable."

"Agreed."

Noah stared at Ethan.

"Then stop looking at Ballymore."

"What's the wind?"

"Twenty-eight knots crosswind, gusting thirty-five."

"Runway condition?"

"Damp."

"Braking?"

"Unknown until we're down."

Noah turned fully toward him.

"It's not a runway. It's a trap."

Ethan nodded.

"Then Shannon."

Noah looked relieved.

Until Ethan added:

"If we can find a path."

They requested updated weather vectors.

Controllers worked frantically.

A possible corridor appeared south of the worst cell.

It added twenty-three minutes.

Noah checked hydraulic quantity again.

"We may not have twenty-three minutes."

Ethan studied the leak rate.

"Can we isolate more?"

"Maybe, but we risk losing systems we still need."

"Then don't."

The word "maybe" was becoming too common.

In the cabin, Rebecca tried to maintain order.

Passengers wanted answers.

She didn't have enough.

"Ladies and gentlemen, the flight crew is managing a technical issue. Please remain seated with your seatbelts fastened."

A passenger shouted, "Are we crashing?"

"No."

Rebecca said it firmly.

Technically, she didn't know.

But panic was its own emergency.

Victor Hale leaned across the aisle.

"The man in the cockpit. Cole. Who is he?"

Rebecca looked at him.

"Right now? Someone helping us."

"I searched his name."

He held up his phone, which still had intermittent onboard internet connectivity.

Rebecca's expression hardened.

"Put the phone away."

"He was involved in an Air Force accident."

Lily heard him.

Her head turned.

"What?"

Victor stopped.

Rebecca stared at him.

"Not another word."

But it was too late.

Lily stood.

"What accident?"

"Lily," Rebecca said gently.

"What happened to my dad?"

Victor looked ashamed.

"I shouldn't have said anything."

"But you did."

Lily's voice trembled.

"What happened?"

Rebecca sat beside her.

"Your father can tell you when we're safe."

"Did he crash?"

"No."

"Did someone die?"

Rebecca didn't answer quickly enough.

Lily went still.

Across the cabin, Victor lowered his phone.

He had found an old article.

Air Force Pilot Under Review Following Controversial Emergency Landing.

Another headline:

Hero or Reckless? Questions Surround Captain Ethan Cole's Final Mission.

The articles were eleven years old.

Details were limited.

One pilot severely injured.

A multimillion-dollar fighter destroyed after landing.

Command dispute.

Ethan had disappeared from public record soon afterward.

Victor looked toward Lily.

Suddenly his earlier comments felt small and ugly.

"I'm sorry," he said.

Lily didn't look at him.

"My mom said Dad saved someone."

Victor glanced at the article again.

Maybe she knew more than the reporters had.

In the cockpit, Ethan heard Noah speaking to air traffic control.

The south corridor was still available.

Barely.

They would need to descend another four thousand feet.

Ethan looked toward the dark clouds outside.

Lightning flashed far away.

"Let's go."

Noah began coordinating.

The aircraft turned gradually south.

For ten minutes, things remained stable.

Too stable.

Ethan distrusted it.

"Tell me about your daughter," Noah said suddenly.

Ethan glanced over.

"Why?"

"Because you look like you're trying very hard not to think about her."

Ethan returned his eyes to the instruments.

"Nine years old."

"Only child?"

"Yes."

"Mother?"

Ethan paused.

"Died last winter."

Noah's expression softened.

"I'm sorry."

Ethan nodded once.

"She made me promise I'd keep Lily safe."

Noah looked around at the failing cockpit.

"Rough night for promises."

"You have kids?"

"Two boys."

"How old?"

"Four and six."

"Then you get it."

Noah nodded.

"I get it."

For a few moments, rank, background, and age disappeared.

They were simply two fathers trying to survive long enough to go home.

Noah asked quietly, "What really happened on your last military flight?"

Ethan's eyes remained forward.

"Not now."

"Fair."

Lightning flashed closer.

The aircraft began shaking.

Not dangerously yet.

But enough.

Noah activated additional weather avoidance procedures.

The radar showed yellow and red ahead.

"We're skirting the cell."

"Keep distance."

"I'm trying."

Then the hydraulic warning changed.

Noah stared at it.

"Leak accelerating."

"How fast?"

Noah calculated.

"Bad."

"How long?"

"Maybe thirty minutes before that system becomes effectively useless."

Shannon was still more than forty minutes away.

Ballymore was eighteen.

Noah swore.

Ethan said nothing.

The decision was approaching on its own.

The aircraft suddenly yawed.

Noah corrected.

Response delayed.

Ethan assisted.

"Easy."

The aircraft steadied.

Noah looked at Ballymore's information again.

"Crosswind thirty-one now."

"Runway heading?"

Noah told him.

Ethan calculated the component.

"Still outside comfortable margin."

"Outside certified limit depending on configuration."

Ethan stared at the weather.

Shannon forty-one minutes.

Hydraulics thirty.

Maybe.

"Contact Ballymore."

Noah looked at him.

"We haven't decided."

"We're running out of decisions."

Noah transmitted.

Ballymore tower responded immediately.

They had been alerted by regional controllers and were already preparing emergency crews.

Runway available.

Wind thirty knots, gusting thirty-four.

Surface wet.

Visibility good.

Noah closed his eyes briefly.

"Wet runway."

Ethan asked, "Any other runway orientation?"

"Shorter secondary."

"How short?"

Noah gave him the number.

Ethan shook his head.

"Primary."

Noah stared forward.

"If we land fast with partial flaps, we may run off the end."

"If we go to Shannon and lose primary hydraulic control before arrival, we may never reach the runway."

Silence.

Those were the choices.

Neither good.

One merely arrived sooner.

Noah contacted dispatch and technical support.

Engineers came onto the frequency.

They discussed system degradation.

Checklist options.

Brake redundancy.

Flap extensions.

Ethan listened.

Most of it was specific to the aircraft.

He let Noah lead.

That mattered.

Ethan knew fighter jets.

Noah knew this machine.

Survival depended on neither man's ego becoming larger than his expertise.

Finally the airline operations specialist said what neither wanted to hear.

"We recommend landing at the nearest suitable airport before further hydraulic degradation."

Noah replied, "Ballymore is outside normal crosswind comfort and marginal runway length."

"Understood."

"Shannon?"

"System projections suggest significant risk before arrival."

Noah looked at Ethan.

The decision was his as acting pilot in command.

Ethan said nothing.

He refused to steal that responsibility.

Noah took a slow breath.

"Flight 782 diverting Ballymore."

The words entered history the moment he spoke them.

Rebecca received the announcement moments later.

Prepare cabin for emergency landing.

She stared at the handset.

"How much time?"

"Approximately sixteen minutes."

"What's the condition?"

Noah hesitated.

"Precautionary."

Ethan gave him a look.

Noah corrected himself.

"Serious. Tell them to prepare fully."

Rebecca's voice softened.

"Understood."

She walked into the cabin.

Every face turned toward her.

Lily knew immediately.

Rebecca crouched beside her.

"We're landing soon."

"Where?"

"Ireland."

"Is Dad coming back?"

"Not until after we land."

Lily swallowed.

"What do I do?"

Rebecca looked at her with the same seriousness she would have used with an adult.

"You listen to me. You keep your seatbelt tight. When I tell everyone to brace, you bend forward exactly like I show you."

Lily's eyes filled with tears.

"What about Captain Bear?"

"Hold him tight."

Victor leaned over.

"I'll sit nearby."

Lily looked at him suspiciously.

He gave a small embarrassed smile.

"No aviation advice. I promise."

For the first time, Lily almost smiled.

Rebecca moved through the cabin demonstrating brace positions.

Passengers began sending messages to family whenever the onboard connection worked.

Some cried silently.

Some prayed.

Some stared straight ahead.

Lily did none of those things.

She took a napkin from the seat pocket.

Then borrowed a pen.

She wrote carefully.

DAD,

YOU SAID YOU WERE GOING TO BRING ME HOME.

SO DO IT.

LOVE, LILY.

She folded the note twice.

"Rebecca?"

Rebecca returned.

"Can you give this to him?"

Rebecca looked at the folded paper.

Then at Lily.

"I'll try."

Minutes later she slipped it through the cockpit door.

"For you."

Ethan took it.

He recognized Lily's handwriting instantly.

He opened it.

For several seconds he said nothing.

Noah watched.

"Good news?"

Ethan handed him the note.

Noah read it.

A faint smile appeared.

"Your daughter gives direct orders."

"Gets that from her mother."

Ethan tucked the note into the pocket of his navy-blue hoodie.

Ahead, Ballymore Airport appeared on navigation.

Fourteen minutes.

Hydraulic pressure dropped again.

They began preparing for landing.

Partial flaps.

Possible degraded spoilers.

Emergency braking strategy.

Crosswind correction.

Noah briefed Ethan thoroughly.

"This is not like landing an F-16."

"You've mentioned that."

"I'm going to keep mentioning it."

"Please do."

They planned roles.

Noah would manage configuration, thrust and systems.

Ethan would assist physically with control inputs if the hydraulic degradation increased.

No heroics.

No improvisation unless necessary.

Noah lowered the landing gear.

For one terrible moment, nothing happened.

Then indications began changing.

One green light.

Second.

Third.

"Gear down."

Both men exhaled.

Then a new warning appeared.

Noah stared.

"Right spoiler system fault."

Ethan looked at him.

"How much does that hurt?"

Noah did not sugarcoat it.

"Stopping distance just got worse."

"By how much?"

Noah calculated.

Then he looked at the runway length.

Their projected stopping distance was now dangerously close to the pavement available.

And that assumed the brakes performed normally.

Ethan stared at the numbers.

"We need every foot."

Noah nodded.

"We also need to touchdown almost perfectly."

Outside, rain began striking the windshield.

The airport appeared ahead as distant lights.

Then Ballymore Tower transmitted:

"Flight 782, updated wind three-four-zero at thirty-two, gust four-one."

Noah went silent.

Forty-one knots.

Ethan looked at him.

"That's beyond limit."

"I know."

"Can we wait for the gust to drop?"

Hydraulic quantity ticked lower.

Noah shook his head.

"Not for long."

Lightning flashed behind them.

The storm they had avoided was moving toward the airport.

They were being squeezed between failing machinery and worsening weather.

Ballymore Tower called again.

"Flight 782, emergency equipment standing by. Runway two-seven cleared to land."

Noah's hand hovered over the radio.

He looked at Ethan.

Ethan touched the folded note in his pocket.

YOU SAID YOU WERE GOING TO BRING ME HOME.

SO DO IT.

Noah keyed the microphone.

"Ballymore Tower, Flight 782. Cleared to land two-seven."

The runway lights grew larger.

And in the cabin, Rebecca gave the command no passenger ever wants to hear.

"Brace! Brace! Heads down! Stay down!"

Lily bent forward over Captain Bear.

Ethan watched the runway.

Noah monitored the wind.

The aircraft descended.

One thousand feet.

Stable enough.

Five hundred.

A gust shoved them sideways.

Ethan corrected.

Three hundred.

Another gust.

Noah called:

"Too far left."

Ethan adjusted.

"Correcting."

Two hundred.

The runway slid sideways across the windshield.

Noah's voice changed.

"Ethan."

"I see it."

One hundred.

The aircraft rolled.

The runway edge rushed toward them.

Noah shouted:

"Go around!"

Ethan reached for power.

Then the hydraulic pressure warning turned red.

The system they had been relying on was failing completely.

And Ethan realized with horrifying clarity that if they climbed away now, they might never regain enough control to make another approach.

He had less than three seconds to choose.

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